Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/535114 check that link for the latest and most funny one of the series
You wanted my opinion..
Well first up i think that you could improve som of your drawing skills the ordinary hentai movies are usually very impressive. So my advise to you would be to either improve alot on your drawing skills or choose another catagory.
I wont go into the voice acting because you could hear that it was recorded from a crappy microphone and not even retouched in like cool edit or your favorite music editor.
ty for your opinion and taking the time to view the movie
eh it could be good but
maybe if you drew your drawings a little bit better and also fix so of the voice acting it could be good because in hentai its alaways how you draw your characters that counts
You asked me to leave a review, so here it is...
The Voice acting was pretty good, you only need to boost the volume next time since I couldn't hear some parts of the movie.
The video didn't looked bad but still, you need to improve your drawing skills a bit.
There are some jokes in it, some of them were funny, but I just don't like a bunch of gay's doing stuff with eachother so I have to give you a 4..
If you use your skills for something none hentai more people will watch and more people will appreciate your work!
you liked the voice acting xD and lol i see your point as to why this isnt your type of thing
o crap, I sliped
I never thought, one day, a dude would ask me to rewiew a hentai lol.
you have to spend a lot more time on it if you want it good.
I laughed but that's it.
try to draw more with the tool that you used to draw bulma when she get fucked.
the sound is terrible. in the publication setting, put the sound on 128bit and not 96.
but it's allways fun.
.....my eyes hurt
the drawings need to more defined around the edges, higher quality sound and maybe a better storyline won't be such a bad idea. It was a ok piece but any more works should be of a better quality.
A short film about a park bench
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.