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Danger with Yo-Yo

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Mar 2, 2008 | 7:46 AM EST

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This is not perfect, its better not online..
im experimenting with the timing so dont freak out if you are watching it and its all like Bah..

i just earsed the whole play thing.. :(
hope you didnt vote while it was messd big times
THE QUALLITY SUPOSE TO LOOK BAD Dx
This most been the most random cartoon i made in my whole life :]
Don't diss my english in this cartoon becouse thats how it supose to be.

Its aboute a girl named Andrea.. wont say more bout that..
reply if questions.
Hope you like!

Reviews


SonniSonni

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Hmm...

From what I get when watching the flash movie. This is about the yo-yo effect of eating a lot and then trying to lose weight right?



WeAllLikePeanutsWeAllLikePeanuts

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Could have been better.

As I said could have been better. You should have added a plot to the movie so it does not get boring. I still liked it a bit. I think it can be improved. Think of this as a Beta.

GOOD JOB AND KEEP TRYING!


Aped3sign responds:

well, if its one think i wont, it is not keep on try and try :]


NutronicNutronic

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

OMFG

First let me say I had to volume turned down most of the movie, and only after testing it near the end to see if it had volume did I immediately turn it back down.
Hilarious! Seriously, without the volume, I at first thought it was very crudly animated, and not that great. but after the scene with the (what I will go with in my mind) and short term pregnacy, I could not stop laughing. IT was so randomly animated, that without sound it just seemed like a bunch of self-mocking images with only the main character used as a gag anchor. It was when I turned up the volume (because at this point it clicked that there had to be volume) and heard the morphed squirrel voice did I almost fall out of my chair and grab my sides.

If this is an honest atempt, please either commit to more higher standards of animation and find a less FPS demanding style, or go in the opposite direction and use less detailed animations to greater extent. Perhaps I'm not the most qualified person to say such things, but if it weren't for the fact I could not stop laughing at this piece I'd have to give it a zero on both scores.

On the posotive side though, it seemed to tell a story, which while I had the volume off, the pictures vividly conveyed ( I know she didn't get pregnant, it just seemed easier to describe it that way). So Kudos for great picture story telling, but please balance out your animation style, with your drawing abilities/efforts.



GreenskullkidGreenskullkid

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Alright, look.

i see what you were trying to do, the thing is.. it just wasn't funny, I voted five, just for the heck of it staying on newgrounds, so yea. I hope it does survive, but please. If you are going to try and do this again, keep the style, even keep the voice. Just make it more funny and ironic.



wilkerwilker

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Yes. YES. YES!

A THOUSAND TIMES YES!! EXCELLENT FLASH.

MOAR!!