Score: 10

"Its good"

by: MoonlightShadowDLS

date: February 28, 2008

10/10 for it so far as you said you cant get the sfx..

Animation is realy good and all so yeah, cant wait to see more, as for the story line..

You said he was a ninja, so i presume he can fight.. if you want to make it become a story then you can have him wake up and run to a dojo to find his master was killed by being slammed into the floor (a small clip will show this in a sort of, flash back) and he seeks revenge on who did, it, I haven't gone into much detail but yeah..
If you need anymore Ideas just message me or something, I could probs come up with more xDD
and cant wait to see more.. you have a fan :)

Score: 5

"..."

by: Scorpion1813

date: February 28, 2008

Graphics are ok, a little short and random. I was hoping to see more, oh and yeah, like the others say.. sound needed.

Score: 5

"looks good"

by: bassman64

date: February 28, 2008

but thats all. definitely needed some sound effects or music... anything. very nicely animated though

Score: 0

"{{Needs a lot more to it}}"

by: Aci6

date: February 28, 2008

Its a flash which needs a bit more added to it, the style is alright (black on a white background), though a little colour wouldn't hurt, also the lack of any sound or SFX is just baffling- it really brings the flash feeling down when there's no sound to it.
Also, the story to it does not make much sense.
It doesn't even really lead up to anything.
Here's hoping the animator can come up with some improvements if there's going to be more of these.

~A~

Score: 9

"good intro"

by: nekoheehee

date: February 28, 2008

looks pretty smooth so far :D
my suggestions are to maybe make the bridge a little more solid when hes running. also sound is a must when you do the finished flash. but looks pretty good so far :D keep it up