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dave cee's shootout prt1

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this is mt first game ive made (thats works)

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needs improving

just a few points
1.make it so you can shoot the guns off them before you kill them that way if you shoot them too much and they come back they cant shoot you
2.make it longer 3 rooms isnt worth the effort
3.mix it up!more weapons more badguys etc

Needs more...

Some sound would help along with some variation (different rooms, enemies, weapons).

its not bad..

not bad.. add more levels, and more than one enemy at a time, will be much much better :) nice first try tho :) keep at it :)

Tons of problems.

1) If you shoot the bad guys more then your suppost to. They come back to life. This is the biggest problem with the game. It makes it unplayable.

2) The enemy design is relly bad. I think it could use more detail.

3) Theres no story what-so-ever. The whole thing seems pointless. Just shoot the circles with faces. Trust me, a simple story and background of the main charater could make a huge difference.

I'm sorry to be so rough. I'm not trying to be mean. I understand that this is your first video game. And it might not be perfect. But there are alot of things that need improvment befor it can be released to the public.

Good 1st try

Needed instructions/ a storyline... found a glitch where the guys came back to life when you shoot at them too much. Still alright for a first game though.

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Score
2.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 27, 2008
5:00 PM EST