Score: 10

"I Love this video!!!!"

by: StickDeath2800

date: February 26, 2008

even though it is a video. it is awesome!!!!!
i love it
you guys rule!
everyone below can die.
you deserve an award!!!!

Score: 0

"First things first, this is a VIDEO"

by: Mymusiclives

date: February 26, 2008

Post this on youtube, but it may actually be better if you don't post this anywhere. The quality was bad, it was hard to decipher noises (In the start), and it made no sense. I don't care about what you say up there : "Yes, it is a video, but judge this film on what it offers, not what it looks like.", well, THIS IS NEWGROUNDS!

Things to improve on: Ummm I generally don't do videos, but one: It needs quality, better sounds, decent story line, and one more thing-It needs to be a FLASH. I know I'm probably pissing you off, but I'm saying this on how I see it. Sorry but no, your project was a complete failure.

By the way, I have an awesome computer, and the quality still sucked at the beginning.

Score: 10

"its called youtube!!"

by: jets2435

date: February 26, 2008

it was not your best work. but i am going out wit ya sista so 10!!

Score: 8

"I really like that."

by: whatty

date: February 26, 2008

Well, My first review in a while. Well deserved, It had a sort of strange out of the blue funny effect on me. You're quite incentric for your age, and that was quite funny, Not a whole heap of quality there, but a general talent for composing a shot, and using flash, I really hope this doesn't get blammed, because it does show a little spark of some proper talent to come.

There is very few negative things I could say about this video. But maybe you should work on your sound, It wasn't very impressive, especially the loop, a bit disappointing in that regard.

All else is well.

Whatty

Score: 0

"Needs a lot more cowbell"

by: roachware

date: February 26, 2008

First, you need to get the picture a bit brighter. You don't have to invest in a bunch of lighting, but at the very least, have some sort of light so the foreground is visible without having to turn brightness to the max on my monitor.

Second, I would get rid of the record scratches. They take away from what is going on. They are good for when something crudely breaks a mood or a character does something that completely breaks from the norm, but it just doesn't work here.

Third, I would sit down and try to write a coherent storyline and coherent script. This makes absolutely no sense.

Good luck with your next submission.