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THIS IS MY FIRST FLASH EVER!
This movie is based on my comic, Metroid: Defusion, and yes, Defusion is spelled wrong...
Check it out at http://www.freewebs.com/b lack-arms-army
Too short. But other than that and the spelling errors, you did pretty good. I hope part 2's gonna be good.
im not an expert or anything at reviewing flash since i haven't learned how to do flash but it was really good keep up the good work
After viewing this movie, I agree with the others. Although you have a few spelling errors... the comic relief really covers that.
But I have to ask... How did Alloy end up getting stuck in the door?
It was a play on how in the orignal Metroid, you could get stuck in the doors to move to the "secret" worlds
As everyone has said, your spelling is a little off. Nothing is wrong with that-I have seen much worse. I suggest the use of any word processor, and spell check. Grammar check, too, because we all know how bad spell check alone is.
As for your animation itself, it was a good sprite flash. Nothing wrong with the flash itself, except maybe that it was a little short.
This is not a reply to the above user only, but to all who have reviewed.
Thank you, to be honest, I was afraid to post the flash here due to all the flaming I see going on sometimes.
Thank you all for sitting through the whole thing!
Note: It's not supposed to be a secret on who the main bad guy is, I did it like that to make it so the characters "Can't tell" who it is, but thanks fo the advice!
Pretty good for your first flash. Just work a little on your animation and spelling. Also try to hide the " space pirate boss " a little better, because Metriod fans will recognize him right away. I already know who he is....
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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