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The animation was good, but a bit repetitive. The poem was great, and read at the right pace for the feel of the animation. What was needed, however, was a visual or two based on the poem, not just the guy walking through the graveyard. If you had him walking through the graves, then various still images in front of that, though not covering it, showing what the poem tells, then you'd have the essence of a visual poem. And THAT would grant the full 5 and 10.
Promised more than it delivered
I agree with the comments about improving the poetry (and the grammar). I found the reading rate too slow. The loop was nice but eventually tedious. Were those birds crows? Funny colour!
yay killswitch engage
great art great music great story
nothing more to say about.
it was actually pretty good, for being a loop and all. i liked the writing, and of course the silent hill music! XD especially stairs of fire at the end, love that song
nice poetry skill though
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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