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Feb 26, 2008 | 4:04 PM EST
  • Daily 3rd Place February 27, 2008

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Reviews


boltfox20boltfox20

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 27, 2008

Not bad

The animation was good, but a bit repetitive. The poem was great, and read at the right pace for the feel of the animation. What was needed, however, was a visual or two based on the poem, not just the guy walking through the graveyard. If you had him walking through the graves, then various still images in front of that, though not covering it, showing what the poem tells, then you'd have the essence of a visual poem. And THAT would grant the full 5 and 10.



gypsydaveygypsydavey

Rated 3 / 5 stars February 27, 2008

Promised more than it delivered

I agree with the comments about improving the poetry (and the grammar). I found the reading rate too slow. The loop was nice but eventually tedious. Were those birds crows? Funny colour!


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BriangoombaBriangoomba

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 27, 2008

yay killswitch engage

great art great music great story

nothing more to say about.



Alucard621Alucard621

Rated 4 / 5 stars February 26, 2008

oooh

it was actually pretty good, for being a loop and all. i liked the writing, and of course the silent hill music! XD especially stairs of fire at the end, love that song



cartascartas

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 26, 2008

WTF

nice poetry skill though