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Was moving, i definitly got into it. But a narrator would have finalized the whole deal for me. None the less, great job on this.
Nice, but would've been much better if you got a good voice actor to read it out with the right tone. There wasn't much space for the text, and it kept coming, meaning I could barely watch the video above (and hence missing all the small details first time thru). Music fits well, but instantly cuts off when you hover over the replay button.
GREAT! NO BETTER!
Well I visited your site, i see you're getting bored! HAHA that's good try something new! but any way that was a pretty good flash but I'm not giving you a 10/10 and a 5/5 for the flash! That was one of the best poems I have ever read! You're up there with E. A. Poe!!! I hope you don't quit poetry entirly! but like I said, take a brea, try something new!
I give it a ten...
...because of good poetry, and an interesting way of presenting it...
I like it
It was pretty boring. The story was kind of screwy too. But I liked the silent hill.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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