Score: 7
"It's original, and it had a meaning..."
date: February 26, 2008
It was a good flash, and had meaning, though, to me, it was hard to decipher it. As I said before it was original, and I said it was good, but you could make it even better.
Things to work on: First, the animation wasn't really choppy, but it wasn't really smooth. The sound quality was OK. It was short. It was confusing for the watcher (i.e me) to figure out the protagonist and the antagonist.
Overall it was a good flash, and you do have the potential to become a very good flash artist. But first, you need to PRACTICE, PRACTICE, PRACTICE!
February 26, 2008
Author's Response:
thanks great review! :D
this is my practice i believe im getting better :3
