Eulogy For: Zombie Test Day 1
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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
02/21/08 – 08/09/09
This is the first semi-good flash I made. made in Liveswif 2.2.
Holy. Fricking. Crap. 1,000 views for this piece of crap? Wow. I guess some people are easily entertained.
Wow... it's got over 1,500 views... I really rather my other Flash submission be reviewed...
wasn't difficult just common sense really.
good first try keep working
Kinda boring (no offence) and would recommend to make background pictures in the game... and make it longer... and more interesting... okay use my idearss
I liked it but it needs to be longer.
nice it was ok all i expected from new flash lol i liked it made it through in one try
Not much to this, it's not a game and it'd not movie there are no cut or anything u just choose one or the other not much point.
Surprisingly cool and I wish you would make one way longer and I'll actually like it a lot! Gj please make more!
This really had no merit. I stopped reading those "Choose Your Own Adventure" rags when I was 7. Maybe I wouldn't have minded if it hadn't been for the zombie theme which really had me ready to play a cool game.
For you information, this is not really good flash.
Avenging Angel
I got through this with no problem. Try again next time.
You should make more choices for each circumstance, and also about midway through the game the song that was looping started skipping and then just shut off, might want to check that. Anyways, nice try. If you are working on another one, put a little bit more time and effort into it and I'm sure it'll be great!
The grapics are horrible and its WAaaaaaaay t short... put some more effort into it next time
It was mediocre, run of the mill, average.
Although, I got a bit of a tickle from it. Just make the next one longer ok?
this was pretty good, but you shold put more effort into it, looks like it took about 10-20 min, put mroe effort into day 2 and maybe add more choices, maybe I watch to many zombie movies, or maybe this is to easy, either way, zi got through it in about 5 seconds if you take away reading time
Right, you have a good concept, but with simple two choices, you can get through quick with minor difficulty, work on the buttons, try and make a "theme" for it all, create more choices and options, simply having it as one choice kills you, is pretty limiting and boring, otherwise, I only suggest backgrounds and animations.
This keeps me in mind of the Make Your Own Adventure Books, that were big when I were young, it could really be good if you improved it, but as it stands, I can't vote any better, sorry.
So, to repeat, a promising idea, but in need of work, focus on:
Options, more than two choices and don't keep dying.
Layout, a uniform layout for all text and choices.
Background/Animation, give us something more to look at.
....zombies,...and thats a good thing. But it lacks the pizazz of most flash zombie games that are out there. Illustrations,..and more choices would definitely help this puppy.
Your concept is nice, but there needs more substance. Maybe some creepy music. Some animation always helps, maybe some more choices. You have to submerge the reader into what he is doing. Plus having bright cherry colours while talking about flesh eating zombies is never cool. Plus it was pretty easy, first time through I made it to the ending. You have the right though, now give it life.
it was a little to short and far to simple but since this is only day one im sure in the following games you could improve by paths that almost wander like saying with the office building you could be forced to run upstairs or check the remaining floors for exits so it has multiple ending possibilities but good start to a good idea
this is really bad
