Score: 7
"Car Salesman sells CD?!"
date: February 16, 2008
What a great little idea. The traditional car-salesman type, but robot formed, attempts to sell a CD of pirate songs.
I loved the sound effects on the voice, with the little echo and the way that the Southern (Georgia) accent seemed to fit in so well with the personality of the robot.
I'd have reccomended a splash for when the CD is flung into the water, plus maybe a little more attention to detail with the splash of water - it looked too lazy for it to be real, hanging in the air for maybe half a second too long.
I'd have said a better location for the commercial would ahve been a pirate ship, but I can see the symbolism of the 'treasure island' and that worked well enough.
[Review Request Club]
February 16, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks, I was going for a Texas accent but close enough! XD
The splash was kinda lazy, next time I'll be sure to work on things like that a little more.
A pirate ship! Why didn't I think of that!? That would have been awesome! "Dang man, I can't do nuttin right."