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The Narrator's Love Story

Author

Samson Loftin (Hylian-Mafia)

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Audio

-´Vexeta`-

by DavidKracht

Faithless - Sasha Tarquin

by Sasha-Tarquin

RGH: Legendary Blue

by RyeGuyHead

Date Submitted

02/12/2008 | 09:00PM EST

File Information

Movie | 3.6 MB

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Current Score

3.84 / 5.00

Score Rank: #10,141
Popularity Rank: #36,523

650 votes | 4,089 views

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Author Comments

*Thanks for the Daily 4th!*

Thanks Tom for the Valentine's Day 2008 Collection

+++Update+++
I shorten the beginning of the animation some people complain it was too long and was sort of unnecessary so I did, but left out the full version in Scene Selections and the end of the film.

+++Story+++
The Narrator tells us a story about love, and how it ends up ruining it for a group of girl on Valentine's Day. This animation does have a romantic feel because it is a Valentine Flash, but not too much romantic feel.

+++Other Crap+++
I introduced a running Turkey in the animation during long lines to hold you attention. Amazingly this animation turned out well this is my best animation to date. The audio in this animation is amazing and I highly suggest you check out them out and plus it's all made by Newgrounds Artists.

I have also posted a script for a scene I was planning on doing. It is located in my news post so check that out too.

Run Time 6 minutes

Enjoy and Happy Valentine's Day!

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Average Score: 8.9 / 10

Score: 10
Shanus

"Pretty Damn good"

by: Shanus
date: February 23, 2008

An excellent story and movie. Topped off with good voice acting.

The graphics were pretty simple, but still they were pretty damn good
Nice character design too.

THe audio was excellent, nice music and really good voice acting, great job.

The story was excellent, funny and refreshing, liked the extras too, great overall movie :D

=Review Request Club=

February 24, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks, for liking everything in the movie! =)

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Score: 10
Haggard

"\m/"

date: February 21, 2008

A very nice submission!

Even though the animation style is kinda sloppy sometimes (for example at the end when the 3 girls are walking down the street) it all just fits together very well.

The plot is nicely planned out and even though you have a lot of scene changes in here it's very easy to follow.
I especially liked the humor you put in here. Sometimes random humor (like the cat in the bed) and sometimes "real" humor.

The voice acting was done very good. All the characters had voices that were easy to distinguish.
Only thing that bothers me about the voices is that sometimes a "clack" sound could be heard when one character was interrupting an other character. Maybe you can edit that quite annoying sound out.

{ Review Request Club }

February 21, 2008

Author's Response:

Ok thanks for the review and glad you liked the humor. For some reason a lot of people loved that cat scene maybe it wasn't funny to me because I expected it, but anyways thanks!

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Score: 9
WritersBlock

"Pretty funny"

date: February 19, 2008

Pretty decent graphics, the light on the screen was a little weird how he was behind it, but the plot was pretty good, amusing, voice acting was decent. I could see a lot of effort went into this, and it came out at quite a decent quality. Good job.

-Review Request Club-

February 19, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks, he was behind the light because I was giving the scene a projector feel and how the projector light is shining on him.

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Score: 9
Cyberdevil

"Woo"

date: February 19, 2008

A cute valentines animation. ^_^ Neat graphics, smooth motions, great music and a great story. Seems like you spent quite some time on this too. Happy Valentine! keep up the great works!

-cd-

February 19, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Score: 8
Coop83

"Funny stuff"

by: Coop83
date: February 19, 2008

I like the way that you've got three teenage girls chasing after one ordinary looking guy. It's so ironic, it's almost believable :P

I think that your animation style is nicely planned out and the delivery of the punchlines was good, if a little repetitive, with the dense, uneducated manner of the main character.

When the three randy girls walk off at the end, I'd certainly consider making their legs move, rather than moving them like chess pieces, or dolls. This was really the only major issue with the flash itself, so good work overall.

[Review Request Club]

February 19, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks, the ending part really I just was too lazy and made them jump like that although I should have made it a bit more realistic rather then like you put it 'They were sorta like chess pieces." So I'll work on a more visually and well animated ending for my next animation.

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