"beatiful"
is very cool yeah
Author Comments
Mario collection plz :]
Hip hop hooray. Another mario flash for you to enjoy. Yum yum.
Don't snort pepper.
<3
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Constructive words :)
First off, let me start by saying I enjoyed your flash.
Animation wise, you need to work on your timing a bit, things progressed slower or dragged on longer than necessary to get the point across/progress the story.
That was the biggest thing I could point.
Next up, I know your materials and possibly flash experience may limit what you could do for this flash, but try to throw in a little more action or variety in the character movements and environment ;) I'm not saying go SMBZ style or anything, But simply diversify a bit and show off what you can do. Doubled up with the timing you could kick some flash behind.
The story, although traditional to SMB could of and did take a few twists. I like that :)
Keep up the good flash mate!
it was gud
it lagged a bit but all in all it was pretty gud oh yeah what text style do you use in dialouge
lol
lol awsome!
awesome
that was fucking awesome
R3DPhoenix responds:
Why thank you sir. :D
