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Well the plot is about there is a cyber world in witch a guy called Shane is froce to do battle with many foes and must do combat or they will die and bla bla you get it.
o yeah it might take a while to load hope u like it vote 5 please
Really now man....
To be honest, this isn't that bad as far as first time submissions go, but when you're offering harsh critique on WHOOKOS who are submitting stuff lightyears above your level, I would expect better.
You can't offer critique on their artwork at all , PERIOD.
And before you say, "Oh but my new flashes are better *Whine excuses*"
Prove it before you offer your artistic opinion on somebody else down your nose, honestly.
hmm uh okay
Well i guess it wasn't that bad but really should have been a little easier to watch. I understand that the quickness was supposed to be like that but eh I don' t know... It was pretty good.
Not my cup of tea
Come on dude stick men fighting?! not very original or funny cough! stickdeaths cough! cough it was kinda sad the animation flow was alrite but the art work bored me 2 tears... u have to take it as well as giving cause ur not that good either... look forward 2 ur reply :)
Wow, you're even more of retard than I 1st thought, ok go back to school and look up a thing called grammar.
Honestly though the only reason why you made this review was to insult me, there is no criticism involved in this review, so how about you go and fuck your self. :)
And just for the record originally I made this flash back in 2002, and when my new animation's come out they will kick the living shit out of yours! O wait they already do.
i loved the art style, make more randomness though...or speech =D
glad you like it
The music was good for an action flash, so it was chosen well. THe animation itself was a bit jumpy, so I'd suggest you'd smoothen it up a bit, add a few frames for movement. It could make it better. The sound effects were nicely timed too, they sounded when they were supposed to. I liked it anyway, I hope you improve for the second one.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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