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SORRY IT TAKES SUCH A LONG TIME TO DOWNLOAD. BE PATIENT.
Sorry but I don't have a prealoader. It's really improved. Please respond with all comments. Appologies to
chris the stick2
The shades gang
Hybird63 and many more.
This is not the final episode so... there will be more... kind of.
nice. but needs more.
well i liked it, but it would be bettr it it improved. you should try to remove taht white frame from marios pic, and ad some back ground when he was flying in the sky. also, you could add an action on hwo he destroyed the air ship. and then, you should make the sprites more clear of his friend, and add more better speach bubble. to all, the persons with that guy. and to the final part you should remove again tha outline. ok? that will improve it. quite much. and add sound if you want. (like when he jumps)
Thank you chris. I do the best I can. The back ground is only changable with coloring it in.
Little too slow
you insulted a cow
need explosion sound effect
all over good.
Ha ha you said doody.
I don't really get what's going on plotwise....Iit seems kind of random/disconnected. The viewing experience in itself isn't that great...kind of glitchy.. In the beginning you can definitely see the entire outline of Mario's box when he's heading towards the plane, and partial outlines some of the time after that. There's a part where half of a speech box is offscreen so you can't even tell what the character is trying to say, and also with 'To be continued', the c is cut off... When Link is talking about the IRS, there's a big line going across the screen, don't know if that's there on purpose or not, and when Ness has that big text box on screen, there isn't enough time between frames to actually read the whole thing.
like I said before. Check out danjo 64's review. I'm just a noob. and I use liveswif, so it can't be that great. It chooses it's own angle so... you get the point.
a few pointers.....the text needs to stay alot longer.....the falling animation needs to be faster and you need to make sure we can see all the text.other then that its not bad...the story line is pretty good
Ain't my fault. Liveswif is a program which chooses its own camera angle.
oh and I'm just a noob. Have some sympathy.
Thanks for the pointer. Oh and I like a heart for a hero flash.
that was pretty good man
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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