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I'm sorry anyone ever had to see this....my first attempt at flash....shut your eyes....its horrid
You could probably get by on graphics like that, but as time goes on you get better at drawing. You need to think of a good idea though, like he goes to stab the other guy, but falls, or something. Being plain obvious is boring.
Man With A Knife
Well i loved the idea but i woulda make the guy kill everyone with a knife and then sucide :P Good flash tho make it longer and add sound -_-
((( HEH )))
OK this was odd, a guy grabs a kinfe and stabs another guy, heh while it was funny in a random way, it lacked story sounds, and more to it, it was very short and just needs more, nice try though, good luck in the future...
A guy picks up a knife and randomly stabs someone
What was the point to this movie? It could have been better in every way, it seemed to be a pointless violence movie but the violence sucked and looked terrible, to improve this you could have made it more violent, added sound, had a background rather than just black and you could have had a story to it or at least had a reason for him to stab the guy rather than him just doing it, the guy didn't even react when he got stabbed and it just looked stupid.
I am sorry that i have to agree with matty_2...this submission is a piece of crap sadly...it was not origianal.. the blood was bad, and the necks were to long... you might want to try and take some time with the next one.... and i do understand that i was your first flash but like i say JUST TAKE YOUR TIME...no one is rushing you. try and add some sound......
PS: WHO THE HELL WAS THE GUY HE STABBED??? totally random
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