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I'm sorry anyone ever had to see this....my first attempt at flash....shut your eyes....its horrid
while the graphics are pretty decent for a first one, the animations are still bad.
the stabbed person didn't even move an inch while he was stabbed!
also, the black background wasn't that entertaining, so you maybe want to work on that a little.
the lack of sound is pretty annoying, as you missed a great opportunity to create an at least decent "first flash".
you definetly have to think of a better plot.
You certainly gave this a decent try. The graphics aren't bad if this actually was your first time fiddling around in Flash.
First, you have no sound, which this could have a lot of. Also, random violence isn't really entertaining or fun at all to most people, and this was just the worst. You could work on the graphics with some more realistic animations and also some shading would be nice.
Well, you tried
The flash itself was pretty bad. The background was just black, the animation was pretty choppy, and there was no sound. However, this really wasn't as terrible as it seemed, as the graphics were actually pretty decent. The blood looked at least slightly realistic, and the slowness gave this flash a surreal feel. You could've added a lot more to this though.
Nice attempt, but dude... It look like you put no effort into this at all.
The characters were sorta 'choppy' I guess you could say.
Nice try :\
but nice attemt @ flash
well my first and only attempt was 30x worse
you could add a little sound tho.........
A short film about a park bench
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