ground hogs day
it must suck trying to kill yourself but death never comes i feel bad for owen wilson
Author Comments
Dreams is a project that took me like one week of animating. I guess It's just another imaginary visual concept taken from certain aspects in our life we usually forget about. But enuf said. Your feedback and constructive critism is well appreciated.
PEACE
MisterHerbal
Oh watch my other movies if you havent already done and if you feel like :)
Thanks.
PS - NEWGROUNDS IS LAGGING THE SOUND SO IT FUCKS UP EVERYTHING. ILL DO MY BEST TO FIX THIS PROBLEM. ANYONE CAN ACTUALLY TELL ME HOW TO SOLVE THIS?
Please take tiem in downloading the movie for appropriate sound.. thanks
http://www.megaupload.com /?d=YBQ0J3A1
it's alright....
a bit weird,but is a little funny,good animation,but you shouldn't just use the same scream over and over again.
You seem good, but this didn't do much for me.
You seem to have relative flash skill, but the subject matter was barely entertaining. Maybe it's just me. The art and graphics were okay, and the animation was average i suppose, but it seemed pointless. How would you describe this flash to someone if you were trying to get them to watch it? "There's this guy, and he's trying to kill himself, but he's dreaming, over and over. Along the way, he screams, and says the F-Word alot." I suppose you were going for some type of symbolism, but who's life is it relative to? Did I mention he said the F-word at more out-of-place and unrealistic times in this 2-minute cartoon than South Park does in a whole 20-minute episode? But it could just be me who has a problem with those things. No offense. Good luck in future work.
MMMmmm...
T'was nay bad but a liitle bit confusing. The sound effects didn't seem out of place as you said in your Authour's comments but you did repeat a lot of them to tiresome effect.
I'm not too sure what the actual story was- something about a guy trying to kill himself but it was all a dream- AAAAAAH! etc...
On the plus side most of the animation was quite good but you could see off the edge of the screen as if you chose the wrong width size on the "Submit" form . Maybe change the value via your userpage or you could add a border to the cartoon and re-upload it.
But what really gets me is that even though the cartoon has finished, while I write this review there is this continuous crappy techno music playing against the backdrop of a completely blank screen. Not so much as a replay button!
This crap music has now gone on for longer than the cartoon itself, which couldn't have been any more than 1.30 minutes long to begin with.
This is why we have a MEGA 9.8 MB! file size for something that barely scrapes two-minutes!
A little bit shoddy on your behalf, Sir.
Alright
It was okay, i like the story line.
There wasn't anything wrong with the sound.
But the animation just wasn't for me.