Score: 5

"i like the song"

by: ovesh

date: February 7, 2008

to bad u didnt continue with it

the graphics were sub par but it wasn't very bad u need some work but u know that i think i like the idea though of the things happening maybe u should make it that all the things are created and have a nice song in the background
i saw potential hope u carry on trying

Score: 1

"..."

by: Catalystika

date: February 7, 2008

A ladybug that has blood spraying out and, apparently, is as big as a human foot. Not good. Not good at all. No plot, no point, just no.

Score: 3

"Needs improvement."

by: XQRLY7

date: February 7, 2008

You showed some very good potential in this movie, however, it isn't high enough quality to validate me voting above a 3.

You've got a few good technical skills down, but the art was still bland and unimpressive.

Suggestions for improvement:

Multiple occurances-
If 2+ things occur at the same time, it's impressive. If your ladybug walked, and flowers sprung up behind her wherever she stepped, that would be cool.

Detail:
You used very basic animation, hardly high quality at all. Redo everything with more colors, more details, and finer lines. It doesn't matter if it's still ugly- at least it will be detailed.

Character Development:
Your ladybug was bland and boring. Animate her steps a little better to give her a personality. Then it's funnier when she gets squished.

Try it again with these steps, and see if you improve.