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Well here it is.
Probably the best flash i've ever made.
At the start I was working on a serious piece, like the Forrrest PREVIEW i submitted earlier.
But this came out :)
I will finish the original soon
i like the song
to bad u didnt continue with it
the graphics were sub par but it wasn't very bad u need some work but u know that i think i like the idea though of the things happening maybe u should make it that all the things are created and have a nice song in the background
i saw potential hope u carry on trying
A ladybug that has blood spraying out and, apparently, is as big as a human foot. Not good. Not good at all. No plot, no point, just no.
You showed some very good potential in this movie, however, it isn't high enough quality to validate me voting above a 3.
You've got a few good technical skills down, but the art was still bland and unimpressive.
Suggestions for improvement:
If 2+ things occur at the same time, it's impressive. If your ladybug walked, and flowers sprung up behind her wherever she stepped, that would be cool.
You used very basic animation, hardly high quality at all. Redo everything with more colors, more details, and finer lines. It doesn't matter if it's still ugly- at least it will be detailed.
Your ladybug was bland and boring. Animate her steps a little better to give her a personality. Then it's funnier when she gets squished.
Try it again with these steps, and see if you improve.
Thankyou ever so much for your review.
I always appreciate a long, constructive-criticism filled review.
I really will use these tips for a new submission.
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