Not bad
For a first attempt, some of the artwork is pretty impressive. The sound loops were annoying though. Keep at it
Author Comments
It was my first flash project it was pretty lame well in my opinion. I had a short time on it so I couldn't finish it cause it had to be turned in so I can get a grade. I took out some scenes and the voice overs were taken from some films and recorded video tapes like for don patches and the voice for my character was crap I had to use the Nintendo Wii mic for the videogame Boogie. Yeah pretty sad I consider it a low budget movie lol but yh i tried my best on it and I'll make the next one better a continuation if you might say. Also my friends helped out with the ending part of it
Hope you enjoy
Hmm..
Well it was not that bad for your first flash, but the least you could do was make a play/replay button? There are lots of tutorials in the tutorial section you could advise on how to make these if you don't know how to.
Oh and also could you change the name in something more eehm.. well let's say clear? 'Part I' of what??
Steve
u tried
since u say u tried ill give a 5. at least u know how to put sound on your flash unlike me.
wth
okay, so the animation is okay, but i stuck with it, i dont get it though, this guy goes to japan and suddenly hes in jail getting his jelly tickled?
decent animation, but way too random, and no plot.
don't get offended, but I would say that this has little point, due to its lack of plot, and the odd movie sound effects. For example, I don't really know who the character was, or why he was travelling, and the voices sounded kind of awkwardly placed. That said, the animation was pretty good, and you obviously put some good time into it. I would highly suggest that you continue with flash, using your same style, but with some good plot and sound, (maybe music is voice acting isnt your thing?) =)
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2.67 / 5.00
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- Feb 6, 2008
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