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by: bertron
Submitted: 02/02/2008 | 01:18PM EST
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Genre: Comedy - Parody
Current Score: 3.95 / 5.00
395 votes | 1,657 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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The longest Shortened Shakespeare flash yet, but I found it really hard to shorten it.
FULL TITLE: Shortened Shakespeare - "The Tempest"
William Shakespeare's The Tempest in, a surprisingly long, 1 minute 34 seconds.
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Average Score: 4.9 / 10
"Well, not bad"
Shakespeare is a tough subject to make interesting, yet your video was decently entertaining. However, the bad sound quality detracted a lot from the overall movie. Also, I found that you might want to clean up the visual style a bit, maybe make it a bit smoother. Still, it was an good movie with some solid funny jokes. Good job!
Yeh, I'm gonna try to get the mic's recording quality a little better next time I voice act, but yeh, thanks for the review.
"speek up"
Im not sayin i dont like it but you need to speek up the next time you are doing a characters voice and dont always say thousands of miles away ok? But nice try!
"Good attempt."
It was a simple little thing, and kinda funny. Good idea too.
But the sound was appalling and made a lot of it hard to understand. Improve that, and I'd give you a better score.
Good try, though. I look forward to seeing the next piece.
Yeh, I'm releasing Othello today, so, that's the next peice. About the sound quality, I'm going to start increasing the quality of the sound output in the flash publish settings, which will mean a heavier file to load, but hopefully much better quality of sound.
"no sound"
no sound
Turn on your speakers.
"alright"
needs more humour, more than simply pointing out characters doing things without reason.
try to improve your recording quality, as sometimes it isn't that great.
And of course animation can always be improved.
~Qwerty
Well, it's hard to fit in any extra jokes when trying to make this as short as possible, which is what I try to do. :P But thanks for the reveiw.
