Score: 7
"You sure have a lot of death in your work..."
date: February 9, 2008
that's a quality graphic for BH! I assume that's his graphical contribution?
I found the part where you read the ban-message a bit boring. Having a voice slowly read out the text we see on-screen just felt patronising for a moment. Maybe you could've just spoken a fair bit faster given that we can also read on-screen?
Anyways, BH's 2nd voice clip was cool and I enjoyed the punchline/laughter.
A silly, chuckle-worthy ending.
I seriously think you should start tweaking the colours to improve your visuals btw - something about those oversaturated colours just kinda brings the flash down a bit for me.
BH being a button was cool. I assume by 'highlight' you meant 'roll over and click'? Nice, though it did mean I missed the explosion first time around. Maybe keep links to the end-frame?
February 10, 2008
Author's Response:
Yes, the BH picture was drawn by himself.
Ah yes, links to contributor's profiles, right? That I really should do and keep (only had it for A Bahamut's Xmas Tale 2). :)
