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An Off*Beat Moment: Snow


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02/01/2008 | 08:02PM EST

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Original characters belong to Jen Lee Quick and her comic Off*Beat http://www.tokyopop.com/p roduct/1514

Tory Blake and Colin Stephens are walking back from the store when it unexpectedly starts to snow.

If you ever see this comic, buy it! It's definetly in my top 5 favs, and there is not enough fanart.

I wanted to get a better feel for actionscript, I'm actually more satisfied with this flash than my others, it's simple, short and I enjoyed making it.

- that and when I went on a walk with Mark <3 it started to snow - reminded me of this.

FeedBack please!!! ^3^

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Average Score: 7.8 / 10

Score: 10
rhiannon722

"cool"

date: April 13, 2008

i loved your animation and i read the wikipedia entry you linked to below and i think i'll try to find a copy of the first book

April 14, 2008

Author's Response:

Go for it, it's well worth the read!

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Score: 7
FlyingCC

"Odd to say the least."

date: February 1, 2008

I like the animation, but there were a few typos (well I just caught 1). Background could use some work and voice acting would be great, trust me your voice wont sound stupid to other people. As for the first review of this, bud you need to get a grip on life. Just because you don't understand it, isn't an excuse to seem rude. Read the "user agreement" below your review, "provide cunstructive criticism". Reviews like that just come off as rude and uncaring, and usually end up making the author upset. Keep in mind your s@#$ smells just like the rest of ours.

February 3, 2008

Author's Response:

oh? what did I spell wrong? (I don't see =_= )

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Score: 7
Pinoyguy75

"It was okay,"

date: February 1, 2008

but Comics usually do better if you can put voices to them and maybe use frame to frame transitions like if it were in the comic book.

February 1, 2008

Author's Response:

I considered something like that for transitions, but this was something I was making to test out using actionscript, I'm just learning buttons :S Next time I will!
Thanks for the suggestions!

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Score: 8
rodaine

"Well...okay ^^"

date: February 1, 2008

I'm not exactly sure what happened there, but I liked the artwork.

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Score: 10
Gagsy

"I fucking love you!"

by: Gagsy
date: February 1, 2008

I am a huge fan of Off*Beat, I've probably read volume 1 and 2 about 5 times each now and really can't wait for the 3rd one to come out.

You brought about one of my favourite scenes so far too, well it is probably everyones favourite scene but it was drawn nice! Did you trace the pictures or did you draw them straight yourself?

Either way, I adore you for being (what I think) the first person to submit Off*Beat flash to Newgrounds! =D

February 1, 2008

Author's Response:

This is one of my favorite scenes too :P
I didn't trace, so some of this took me a a bit, the style is so unique and hard to copy! So it's not exact, but it's as close as I could get it ^^;

Thanks for your comment! Made me very happy :D

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