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Hey Hey, I believe this is the result of blunt abuse. Scott, my cousin, is very odd. This is what i think happens inside his mind, towards the back, that part that's always dreaming but you rarely tune into.
I'll give it one star for effort. But I have a few questions/suggestions.
A; What is this so-called dream even about? It looks poorly designed and sequenced. Is it even about anything? You could try to establish a plot and maybe clean up the artwork a little, unless that's what it's supposed to look like. Like you said "blunt abuse".
B: Sound. What in the blue hell are these characters even saying? Either your mouth was completely covering the mike, or you need better articulation. Equipment quality is also a factor. Sound tests obviously can root out these problems. If I had been able to understand the dialogue, I might've had some gist as to what this toon was about.
C: Please don't advertise a flash as a game when it is not. Honesty in advertising is likely the best policy in this case. That said, don't be discouraged, all things have room to grow. You can only make something the best it can be.
thanks for your time and thoughts regarding my "tuesday..." vid. For this, i will explain... this was the result of 8 hours pure getting high and trying to make up some f*cked up nonsense, a knock about video, as it were, which i think i achieved quite well. I am still learning flash.
A. "the dream" is about what i think goes on inside the head of my sex pest, in the closet cousin. And yes it is rough, as i mentioned, i was getting stupidly stoned with a few friends one afternoon and thought to make this, in a tight time limit.
B. The sound is just quotes taken directly from bad movies. I produce music from time to time, so this base should hopefully be covered if i ever need to record my own voice.
C.(advertised as game) I didn't realise i had, newbie, and don't know how to change it.
again, thank you for your comment, good to have feedback. luke.
Waste of time
Not only is this not a game, it's also a waste of time. People think everything is "Art" these days.
i am an artist, what can i say?
nice flash, but...
you did a very nice job; the drawings...the story...but it would be perfect if you used a preloader
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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