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Whew. It is really hard as an amateur to make an animation. I made this animation during my free hours.Thanks for the tons of tutorials I found in the Internet. Enjoy watching, and have spiritual enlightenment.
The animation was awesome and the syncing was superb but it lacked in action and this really brought it down.
I wasn't expecting over the top action but a guy sitting at a desk occasionally moving his arms doesn't bring in much replay value.
Good job though on what you've got!
the animation was ok. not completely smooth but not bad. your down fall was the subject matter and the way in which it was presented. while I personally do not believe in the Bible I'm willing to admit it has some degree of merit and that those who do believe generally have their hearts in the right place. but you have no idea how often I get the Bible crammed down my throat. that wouldn't be a problem if you had presented it in an interesting fashion. this flash was boring! it was more boring than talking to people at an old folks home. they at least have war stories or juicy tales of their younger days. we live in the age of ADD kids. you've got to keep the attention of your audience or you will never get your point across. I do see some potential in your flash skills though, just please don't give us any more like this.
Oh no! not me...
...i mean, i really find this as a very interesting piece of flash animation. Did you guys notice how he connects those verses from the bible? I've never heard for something like this before, and it is with no doubt, i believe, that there is a great wisdom behind this. Very nice job, keep it up mahn! I know you can't please everybody for this but this, the work of yours, might help someone who really wants salvation and seeking for the right path of life...
Not bad for a first flash.
A little too...err, religious for my taste (I'm Buddhist), but not a half-bad attempt at flash animation. I had to strain a bit to hear it, though. Next time try to increase the audio volume, the quality of the audio, or both.
nice voice acting, nice graphics, n nice syncing the audio with the guys animated mouth, its just not that interesting of a flash, but that is coming from an athiest. you have really nice flash skills, i think they could be used for more interesting things,
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