Score: 6
"Good effort"
date: April 6, 2005
It was an okay submission, a few points:
Art/Animation - The artwork was pretty good actually, however the animation let it down a bit, the bouncing droid bits were a bit too 'floatey', ie they didn't bounce very realistically because they were too slow.
Sound - The main failing, the recording quality is poor and the characters could be voice acted with a bit more emotion behind them rather than seeming lifeless (the two human ones at least!). You can solve recording problems by getting a decent microphone, they're not really that expensive these days. The latter just requires practise so I won't hold it against you much.
The robot voice though is not very good, it would be better if you stuck with something less synthetic, ie mainly voice acted but with more of a robotic hint to it, it should be fairly clear from the artwork if a robot is talking or not anyway :)
Style/Humour - It was a little bit funny, though it could have been better, it has potential though, best thing is to bounce ideas off of a friend or group of friends, you find that this inevitably results in some hilarious things being said which you could use.
