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hi guys i remade my previous submission "Slyguy" and i made this with some edits,
sorry to the guys who took the time out to review the other submission since i deleted it! but here now
enjoy (the flash is named after the shyguy sidekick so of course his name is slyguy)
please review i need as much much criticism as possible (yes even bad ones)
The sprites and the backrounds were different sizes their feet didn't touch the ground. An please don't say my review is usless becuase I can name where every sprite you used came from.
Super Mario World
Super Mario Bros Three
....And much more (Gulp)
rated for motivation
I reated 10/10 for motivation but i really give it an 8/10, it looks real nice and good humor but needs a tad work. It's a great start don't get me wrong, soon this will be a NG classic just keep trying and you'll get better. Add voice, text isn't bad but voice shows you really tried.
PS: Is the shyguy's "flamingo" the chocobo from "Final Fantasy: Legend of the Crystals"
no the flamingo isn't from there, i have no mic so i can't put voices
THIS WAS PRETTY DAMN FUNNY BRO
ONLY THING YOU NEED TO DO IS GET SOME VOICE OVERS MAYBE A COUPLE GRUNTS FROM THE CAST YA KNOW OVER ALL GOOD I VOTED 5 HOPE TO SEE MORE
yeah this wasn't very good. despite the animation being exceptionally choppy, the plot line was lame and it seems like you didn't even write it, you just made it up as you went along. even something as simple as making luigi walk with 2 frames of sprites looked choppy. you need to learn more about fps and motion tweens, etc etc. also, don't rush! i know you were probably anxious to put this up on newgrounds but you really gotta just be patient. the longer you spend on it the better it will be. don't let me get you down though, just keep making movies, come up with new ideas and no doubt one day you will spit out a really good sprite movie. sprites have endless potential, keep working on your skills. peace.
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