Score: 7

"(title in work)"

by: milinko959

date: February 3, 2008

^^Good Points^^
A good start to a series that hopefully will continue. I guess in terms of which one was better...they both had their funny points to them, but I liked the second one better. The joke at the end was pretty random, I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Keep working on the humor a bit. Your shorts have good jokes, but it could definitely be a lot funnier.

Score: 9

"Great"

by: Shanus

date: February 2, 2008

Pretty damn good man. Well written, well animated. Not a foot wrong.
Well I do have one complaint. Mainly the way the audio sometimes crackles. THat could have been easily fixed with some free audio software, but that's it.
Overall nice and random jokes made and excellent movies :D

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Score: 7

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: February 2, 2008

The stories are very simple and short (that's why it's called "shorts" I guess ;) ) but they were funny.

The voice acting was done great, but the sound was lacking some quality. Every now and then it cracked and buzzed, so you should try to work on that. Maybe a better mic would help here, or you could try to use a different program to record the voices.

The graphics are okay, even though I did miss the arms of the characters most of the time. I think it would look much better, if they had arms all the time, not just when they need them.

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Score: 8

"Alright"

by: Little-Rena

date: February 2, 2008

Well the menu was good although I would suggest putting a "Play Short 1" and "Play Short 2" on the menu in someway, just incase someone wants to come back to it and want to watch one of those. The voice acting was okay in most parts although some of it seemed a little jumpy, decent enought to hear though which is okay.

Animation and graphics where pretty nice too, although I would maybe suggest in the second short the breathing thing, just animate the chest as oppose to the whole top half because taking deep breaths he seemed to be getting fatter and then normal. But otherwise, pretty nice work.

4/5

<3

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Score: 8

"It's pretty good"

by: WritersBlock

date: January 31, 2008

Although I find their lack of arms for the most part, disturbing. You should change that when you do the series. The humour wasn't bad, although I think it'll be good in the context of a full script. Overall, the graphics were pretty decent, voice acting was fairly good, it's an enjoyable movie.

Nice work.