00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

Kingkavvvv just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

multi battle test

Share Collapse

Author Comments

i know it's awkward to just post about 30 seconds movies but this is still unfinished i'll post in the finish version when it's ready . i just feel maybe i could do with some advice and help.

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

0-0

hey there! it's me.... really great job over there.....i'm sorry but i'm very occupied in these days.... so i didn't do very much with our "project"(i'm even a little lazy XD) but i can see that you are doing a great job..... my advices: i'd like to see more blood..... maybe make the scenario a little bigger... and maybe add some weapons.... now i'm going to see your other submission.... than i think that i will try and continue my crappy one....XD keep on the great job!

threassance responds:

thanks alessio. and by the way your animations are cool. you just don't have the right time, yet, i know you have it in you too. vero? so try and bring it out. i know i'm waiting for the day you will o.k. ;)

it was sick

dude that was really tight still NUMBER 1 THING: MAKE A STORY LINE

but it was tight

threassance responds:

i finally decided to make a short storyline on one of me test clip, the new one, u know just a short one with about 3 episodes. just to test the use of storyline before getting into bigger project.
and thanks for the comment i appreciate ur support.

Not to great

1) Over used theme
2) Over used sounds
3) Over used camera
4) Over used colours
5) Over used amount of enemies
6) Over used cliche

threassance responds:

well i guess i over used a lot of things heh???
well i'll not to next time. thanks.

Interesting

Some cool aspects, and definitely more than I originally thought in terms of value. the stone cracking effects were nice. Add music, a background, some story and you got a decent movie

threassance responds:

thanks i'll try my best to do that.

Great

Very well done. Keep up the good work.

threassance responds:

thanks man, i'll keep trying my best.

Credits & Info

Views
3,915
Votes
8
Score
3.31 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 21, 2008
7:05 PM EST