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Marianne Martinez (Buy!)


Submitted: 01/20/2008 | 08:30PM EST

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Current Score: 3.81 / 5.00

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One of my earlier works in flash, this is a teaser for a cartoon series I have always wanted to make based on a story I wrote in my teens. Like Turista, I had to abandon it for many reasons.

I definitely will come back for this one though, as the story has always been one of my favorite creations.

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Average Score: 9.1 / 10

Score: 8
piesandbombs13

"not sure..."

date: October 19, 2009

animation was good and it was lsightly funny... the beginning reminded me of the intro to the halo 3 campaign... overall I would like to see this...

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Score: 9
Microbe

"good stuff"

date: January 21, 2008

nicely animated, really nice art, little bit random... :P but I'm looking forward to seeing more.

One thing though, I don't think the preloader works properly, it loads a small amount then just jumps to play. I don't know if this is just me but you might want to take a look.

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Score: 9
rawkr122

"poor fella"

date: January 21, 2008

hes gotta pee really bad :P
the graphics were great and this looks like it'll be a promising story when it comes out
only thing i didnt like was the music
9/10

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Score: 10
Tacohead

"Good job."

date: January 21, 2008

Very nice, very nice. Can't wait for the entire project to come out. 5/5

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Score: 5
NionKokesu

"Review"

date: January 21, 2008

Wow; someone in one of my classes is doing a project with a very similar story. Then again, I don't think this is the most original plot. The look is nice, especially the layouts, but I don't like the tweening so much. Gives it that cheap flash look that you're obviously very capable of transcending. Looks like it will be a nice project when you finally get to it.

January 21, 2008

Author's Response:

I don't reveal anything from the story here. Just the fact that he has to pee.

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