Score: 6
"well..."
date: January 20, 2008
the camera angles were fantastic, a little shaky, but well done. Of course the quality of this video was not up to par, and some scenes were difficult to make out.
i seriously would recommend you -at least- place some gunshot sound FX in there, because it looked so silly just seeing guns pointing and jerking back.
the dialog scenes were pointless since you couldn't make out what he was saying, so i recommend you cut out the dialog in it since this movie is more about expression and action rather than speech.
the music was not that good of quality. but it was better than some that i have heard.
and placing a "Fin" at the end of the movie would be appropriate.
again, nice work on the camera angles. this movie can be much better if it's worked on and follows some suggestions i have given. good luck.
January 20, 2008
Author's Response:
You're right about the audio and video quality, audio was 64 kbps compressed twice (once to wmv, then to swf instead of a straight shot to flash). Of course, as per the rest, I had basically thrown the whole thing together in one day and was planning to actually create a score for the movie itself - this was a rough cut that I made to see how well I could edit to match "pre-fab" music. Thanks for the ideas., definitely will be utilized next time.