ehh
not a bad one for your first time besides i saw worse craps on NG b4
Author Comments
This is the first part of A Battlefield Life. I intend to make more, but it would like kind of odd on the portal to have the first part left out. If this one doesn't pass, I probably won't make any more. Obviously, this is my first flash work, so it's not great graphics. On my next I hope to make the graphics a lot better, but I was just getting used to flash.
This movie is a parody of Battlefield 2, and how idiotic a lot of the people playing can be. It's not a replica of the game by any means of course, the game has the best graphics DX9 has to offer, and there's a lot of things I pulled out of my head to make the movie more interesting.
All reviews are read, responded to, and taken into consideration for following parts of the series. Also, please recommend this for Video Game Parodies! Thanks.
Well, I'll leave it at that. Enjoy.
Edit: It seems really unsynchronized compared to when I was testing it, if it passes I'll try and get it all fixed up. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Edit 2: Audio bugs should be fixed, sorry for any inconvenience. Title of Part 1 also added to beginning credits. Explicit Audio lowered to Mild, I think Teens should be allowed to watch... Beginning work on Part 2, The Hotel.
There's hope here...
....voices aren't bad,..graphics need work,...maybe a faster pace. But theres raw talent there. Keep trying man.
IanShine responds:
Thanks for the positive feedback, the graphics I'm designing for the next part are a lot better, and there will be a lot more action in it, since the battle hasn't technically started in Part 1 yet. Keep your eyes open, because I'll be releasing that as soon as it's done.
its ok...
but i thought the graphics and sounds REALLY needed some work.
IanShine responds:
I know that the voice overs need work, but I was pretty sure the sound effects were fine. Also, I know the graphics need some work, and in Part 2 all the graphics should be improved. I've got some good ideas waiting for Part 2, so check it out, I should have it done in anywhere from a few days to a couple weeks.
Poor quality.
However, your thoughtfulness to the projected audience is evident. This will take you far once your skills improve. That is all.
IanShine responds:
Thanks, don't forget to watch for Part 2, The Hotel!
A good start
I think it is a good start.
A few different character voices would be nice. It was difficult to tell who was speaking.
The animation is quite unsynched, but that can be fixed and reuploaded.
Overall a good submission, and keep working on that art =]
IanShine responds:
I've fixed most of the audio bugs, and for Part 2 I'm getting some more people for voice acting. Also, in Part 2, I should have some at least basic lip syncing on characters, so it'll be obvious who's talking.
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