Score: 1
"Some of it was there..."
date: January 19, 2008
Though you missed out a lot of the story, I have seen a performance and worked with a performance of the tempest, and you had missed out a lot, as you should have made a short scene for every scene in there, I saw nothing about The monster, or his relation with the Jester and Butler, also you should have added Ariel.
I can safely say that the whole of the story was missing, I have had a part in many of Shakespeare's plays and you gave no help to how the story actually went.
Finally the speech was very low quality.
If you are to do this then you have to add every scene as the actual story was not even seen in this flash.
