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a law and order rip off
3: Starting score
2: No story, there wasn't anything to watch. fix; make an animation, not an intro.
1: Poor animation, not only was there no story, but the animation that WAS in there was less than half-assed. Fix: take your time, and avoid saying "ehh, good enough"
Needs alot of work.
Needs to be alot longer,
needs a story line,
and needs some bugs worked out.
Besides that I would say nice effert but needs alot more work and a story line.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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