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Jan 18, 2008 | 7:13 PM EST

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I fixed teh problems with the white background!!!
One thing is that you should notice it has no preloader. That's because I use liveSWF.
If it takes a verylong time to download, try going to another page for a few seconds then go back.
This one is about a new enemy of the Nintendolanders. It is good.
Please vote a 5 on it.



Rated 0 / 5 stars

Still terrible

1st off, the backgrounds weren't fixed, if they were, you wouldn't have seen the sky-blue all around Mario when he "Bombed"/Humped the big black oval thing that was supposed to be the Jaguar, and again with the moving sidewalk thing. I would seriously be surprised if the whole GWC series has collectively taken you more than half an hour. If it has, you obviously have to try harder and upgrade your flash package, because half of your responses to reviews is "yeah live swf sucks" yeah, it does, and it has been for every single one of your movies. How these movies are actually passing judgement is far beyond me, but I do see that the people listed as co-creators are leaving you reviews, so that probably has a little to do with it.
One final note: more text takes longer to read, so when character say a whole paragraph of dialouge, give it more than 4 seconds, likewise, when someone just says "yeah!" it doesn't need a whole 4 seconds.

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mangostenmaster responds:

Teenage anghst! {:-P


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I liked the music

hmmm, I don't really understand the story that well.... I lol'd when Mario was like, "Follow me!" then fly away, how did they follow him?

mangostenmaster responds:

Well, thank you for being of constructive criticism. I don't know how they followed him. I use live swf, so sometimes its glitchy. It's ussualy not this bad, but yeah. Liveswf has its days.


Rated 0 / 5 stars


Terrible. Story sucked. Animation sucked. Bottum line, it all sucked.....hard. O, and before I forget, I was just intrested in the flash. Be thankful that I even laid my eyes on this crap.

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mangostenmaster responds:

If you don't like it, then don't watch it!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

1 complaint

Well it was good, but I next time try using animeations, It might look better.

mangostenmaster responds:


Brick Road in a horny elmo in a pail of water evveryone holds it in cuz diahhrea is explosive. Salmon crash into a boat and break their neckz or spinal cordz;


Rated 2 / 5 stars

not very good

The story was ok, but the problem with the layers ruins the whole thing.

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mangostenmaster responds:

Sorry. I use liveswf. It is not genneraly this bad, but this time it had a problem. I appologize for any dissapointment.