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Short skateboarding flash with a weird commentary track at the end.
Animation, Backgrounds, Music, Voices - Jon
Acouple sound effects - Someone else
The part where the his eye opens,
i can tell that you spend aot of time making that, it looked very very very good,
By Using Your "IMAGINATION"
First off your artwork and animation are quite superb. Everything flows so well. The voice acting was also quite superb... very comical with the monotone voices, but also good with the -commentary- bit at the end. The background music I think could've been better, it was alright, but it just seemed rather bland to be honest. The storyline was brilliant, capturing the imagination of someone and then having them fail... but the commentary and text commentary of the commentary was comic gold. Something I truly enjoyed to be honest.
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nice beginning at what a FACE PLANT that's gonna hurt MUCH but this one is ok for me so its 9/10 added with a 5/5
I liked this alot and i found the commentary a bit boring but the little bits of speech made up for that.
Agreed with you there. Thanks.
I love the commentary at the end, lol. It's so funny.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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