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Submitted: 01/17/2008 | 12:44PM EST
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Genre: Comedy - Original
Current Score: 3.79 / 5.00
1,088 votes | 19,328 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by Jon (Liquidsword): — Choose below… — Confinement + Everyday Life + Lonely Friday Nights Murder + T O A S T Trippin +
Short skateboarding flash with a weird commentary track at the end.
Credz Animation, Backgrounds, Music, Voices - Jon Acouple sound effects - Someone else
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Average Score: 8.6 / 10
"Pretty good"
I really enjoyed the quality of the animation, it was pretty smooth and the skating scene felt very powerful. I felt the humor was lacking and I did get smiling until towards the end of the commentary when that ludicrous chart was drawn. It was a decent flash, although I wish it was longer. I look forward to your next piece!
"haha!"
I really love this one! Yeah, sometime people will make university thesis just in the interpretation in their commentaries...
The speech was really funny and the most hilarious is that you did think outside the box in this flash.
Please continue doing flash movies!
"nice job"
I like the work done for the flash. The commentary was kinda funny with the incohearentsy Good job.
"nice commentary"
the guy below doesnt know what hes talkin about. in fact the whole joke is the commentary, and no...commentaries dont have to be optional, if thats how the author intended it to be, then thats how youre going to watch it.
i like the double commentary lol. the skate stuff really isnt anything...but the talking with the text making fun of the speaker was funny
"Commentaries are Meant to be Optional"
Now, the animation and premise are okay during Acts I & II--the imagined success and the real failure and injury--but Act III's rambling commentary detracted from the experience because it was poorly done... both deliberately and performed poorly in general (poor performance at being poor... there is such a thing). It prevented me from clicking replay.
To all authors: if you think a Commentary would be cool to add, either you don't or allow it as an optional audio track (even if it is supposed to suck).
