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I was trying out shape tweening on this one, i was workin on it for the past 2 days like my freshly submitted animation PAPER ARE EVIL. Enjoys
bazooka to the face AWSOME
...... what else can I say about this? Its short, with so-so humor.
The graphics and sounds were okay, and the concept was pretty funny, but it was too short. However, you made very nice use of the blur filter.
Short n sweet
Overall good job. Especially based on the fact that its only your 3rd submitted work... id say it was definatly a good job.
its not 3d though, nice try though
Nice try though. Artwork needed work, definitely, and perhaps lengthen your next flash a bit? It's not a failure, but there's enough work to be done here to keep you going for a while. Sound is minimal, although is actually alright quality when it does appear. Colour might be something to consider adding, along with voices to the characters.
A nice little flash, with some good and bad points. I give you four out of ten for humour, sound quality (when it was used) and for showing some animation skills. Keep trying!
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