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Part 1 of a 2 parter i'm doing with my frien Mattuiop.
REMEMBER- pickles aren't always what they seem................
Music by Alice in chains, lenomus and Tomoyasu Hotei.
this is awsome you do it verry well
Well, thankyou very much!^_^
quite liked this keep it up!
I'll get part 2 out soon!
this was pretty good! would like to see more.
Oh BTW I love Alice in Chains! Awesome band!
Thanks, the only song i've actually heard by them is Would.
Thanks for reviewing!(:
Above average storyline.
Graphics - 7
Yes, the quality was a little bad, but I understand it wouldn't have been if there were no size limit on Newgrounds.
Style - 6
This promotes a low rating due to my preference of just not being a clamation fan. Nonetheless the storyline was well played and longer than most clamations.
Sound - 4
Ahh, now I'm thinking that you are in need of a better mic, not only that, it was also very quiet. I also suggest sound effects, not overdone, but in suitable parts of the flash.
Violence - 8
Well of course, being a clamation, it wasn't the most convincing, but it was definitely there.
Interactivity - 5
There's a play button.
Humor - 7
It had it's moments where I laughed to myself.
Overall - 7
Overall this flash warrants a 7/10, which is not bad considering my preference on a clamation, so take it from me, it was above average. I also found the alien to be nicely made, unfortunately there didn't seem to be any other original characters, but there you go, when it comes to a clamation there isn't really much original you can do that hasn't been done countless times before, there is always a limit.
Well, basically, the only things that need work is most definitely the sound quality and volume, and if possible a quality upgrade is always welcomed ;)
K, i'll use that advice in future!^_^
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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