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Jan 14, 2008 | 8:10 AM EST

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Author Comments

Okay i have been working on this for about a month now and my attention span is wearing thin... so i've decided to submit this preview! I've tried to submit an alpha for this but it doesn't seem to be working... anyone know what is going on with that? I really need some constructive criticism to know if this is worth finishing and nice comments will give me the motivation i need to complete it!

The basic overview is that Blu is going to an ATM to get his money out... but problems arise when he tries to do so and is set on a journey to fix this "problem". Please enjoy!

Song is cash machine by hard fi

Reviews


ix00biix00bi

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great.

Lower the music and put in some voices.


RedBoxPariah responds:

thank you and yeah i'll get on that


LaothiasLaothias

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Cool.

When will be the second part?:D


RedBoxPariah responds:

Uhhh the whole thing could be done in a week a month? Depends on what happens along the way i guess... but one thing is for certain... IT WILL BE FINISHED!!
THANKS!


soulblade994soulblade994

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

i liked it

u shud make more of these they r really good


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RedBoxPariah responds:

i'll finish this one first and then i shall try to think of something else for blu to do... or kill...
THANK YOU


HypeSystemHypeSystem

Rated 5 / 5 stars

looking forward

looking forward to this


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RedBoxPariah responds:

me too... i'll try not to disappoint, may be another month or even a week (depending on my attention span and completion of holiday homework (eep!)...)
THANK YOU


Big-Red-HeadBig-Red-Head

Rated 4 / 5 stars

i liked the preveiw

could use some voices but other then that, it seems pretty interesting. ill be waiting 2 watch the final production


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RedBoxPariah responds:

Will be doing voices! Glad to know there is anticipation out there! THANK YOU