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after a long time struggling with the movie, is it finally here, part 1 of dragon invasion, I dunno how many there are gonna come, but it's my 1st movie so don't rate to hard, ok?
you need way more frames, i made the same mistake with my 1st flash attampts. what frame rate are you working with? its way to short. i recommend improving the special effects, add more detail, and add a background. Good choice of music though, and pretty good for a 1st.
with around 10 fps, I thought it would be nice makng it not too fast, and not too slow, and there are several things that I can't really find to make it better, but still, I'm just a beginner, so, I don't really care right now, the next one will be better
Idk about that
Even if it's your first, it should be rated no lighter then any other. Otherwise it won't get better.
Well, just got done watching it. Stay more consistant (ie:main character changes) and finish out scenes, like that dragon getting blasted. He just... appears on the ground in a pool of water (chances are blood). I did like the music however. I hope to see this story grow, and your skills improve.
thanks, it's really hard to make it look like this, I wanted to do voice acting, but it would've made it to big you know.
First time eh?
For your first time, it aint all that bad. The concept of the story is good, and the animation is not all that relativly bad. It's pretty smooth compared to what I've seen other people do for the first time.
It's cool that you have music, but it doesnt fit in with the story at all. When you see people shooting at dragons, you expect somthing a little more hardcore. You should also work on perspective of your drawings, and get to know them a little bit more when animating.
Since it's your first time, (plus I don't have anything up on newgrounds to top this.) I'm giving you a six for effort.
thank you a lot, I'll make the next one with more music and way more frames
Well, the preloader is off centre - which doesn't make it look professional (not a biggie though)
When replaying - the music overlaps
Poor Graphics and Bad English - pretty bad.
I'm from the netherlands nd I'm just on highschool, so I didn't have that much English yet, and the movie is set on the wrong way what made it in a different look, I'll fix it right now
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