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I received a lot of ending submissions for SMG... sometime I'll post them for all to see! Email requests for porn will be ignored.
The effects on the hands were awesome.
The text moving all over the screen and having to click in different places was totally annoying.
Move all the text to the bottom and differentiate them by colour, then use a button in the same place for all text continuations.
funny, but your rating is a bit off
Graphics and animation were well above where they needed to be for the time. The detail in the characters was almost flawless. The storyline was good and i saw no problems with the audio. If i had to make suggestions for improvement it would be to make the buttons look better by adding more color and effects and to make the text more legible. Also you could have the buttons remain in the same place frame after frame so the viewer doesn't have to move the mouse every time they are done reading. Good job over all, very advanced for 7 years old.
oh my god! i nearly fell off my chair laughing! that was so incredibly funny!
but back to business: the graphics were good, and i really liked the fact, that you can choose the weapon and the setting.
sometimes the text was hard to read, because the backgrounds was nearly brighter than the text. a plain white text box would have been better, imo.
but the worst part (and the reason i am not rate this movie 10/10) is that fucking "your". there is a huge difference between "your" and "you're"!
"... what weapon your carrying" makes no sense at all!
it's a very good and very funny movie, but those grammar errors were annoying. so, try to get rid of those.
It was pretty cool I guess.
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