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Ok, my second flash movie.
Can i have some constructive comments please?
*NOTE I FOUND A COOL REMIX ON NEWGROUNDS THAT I USED AS THE BACKROUND MUSIC AND I REPLACED THAT ANNOYING SOUND IN THE BACKROUND. BUT I WILL DEFINITLEY MAKE A SEQUEL!*
Cute and funny, I really enjoyed watching it! And for being only your second flash movie, I thought it was really well done! Definitely looks like I will have to keep an eye open for the next installment!
wow that was real good good job i thought it was pretty funny too
That was really funny and creative :) iv love it ;] btw background sound was really anoing ;/
5/5 and 7/10 lack of voice and to much background sound :D
WOW! i loved it actualy, creative on the scuicide subject ;)
i think you could use some voiceacting, and the background
noise was PRETTY anoing.
i think that when there is a close up on a ghost
or something you should make tiny bits of the maze still vizzibl
nice submission;) makes you thing
SOUND would help voice -acting! NOt just the SAME sound over and over
6 because the sound (or lack of) ruined alot of jokes and i got annoyed with it
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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