Score: 0
"Needs more thought and effort"
date: January 6, 2008
This flash could have really used a little bit of intelligence in many ways. Firstly the (lack of) coherant plot detracted from the animation, which in itself was done in a seemingly rushed manner. Secondly, the audio was also completely inappropriate for the flash, it seemed as if it was just shoved in at the last minute for the simple purpose of having some audio, rather than put in for its individual merits. Also, it could have used more research into chaos theory itself, the flash doesn't have any real reference to chaos theory. If you had taken the time to read up on chaos theory before you named the flash, you may have come up with something worthwhile and intelligenly poignant, but that clearly isn't the case.
In summary, this flash really needed some more careful thought in every aspect rather than just doing the first thing that comes into your head, or just shoving in some random audio that clearly doesn't fit.
January 6, 2008
Author's Response:
And I suppose youd know how much effort was put into the animation having never made one yourself. Heres an idea, just stop blamming my stuff. Its rude and ignorant escpeically when you spam my inbox in the process. You want attention? Make your own flash!
