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This is an old animation, please don't give me anymore reviews on this one, telling me how I can "improve" :)
Ok, this is something I felt like doing, and it's kinda different from what I usually do, but here you go:
It's a short, and it's pretty crappy.
(title in work)
Honestly I don't really see where this series could be going. Graphically it was a mess. The animation didn't look good at all. There was really no storyline either, since all he did was write a sentence on a wall. Not really a good pilot for this if you plan on making it a series. Nothing interesting to see here.
Well I understand that you thought that you would be helping with a review like this, but this was just a little project I made to get back into animating.
It's almost 2 years old and I've moved on of course.
If you would of checked out my profile you probably would of seen that I've advanced alot.
Thanks for the review, even though I can't really see anything that would help me improve.
pretty good but short
Thanks, man! :)
awesome i like simpsons
haha ;D Thanks, but I tried to dis simpsons in this, note "Simpsons last season sux" haha ;D (maybe you meant that :S :P)
But thanks for the review ;D
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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