Score: 10

"sweet"

by: RyeGuyHead

date: January 10, 2008

the animation was sick, thanks for using my tune :D

Will look for ep 3

Score: 9

"You got what it takes, but could use more"

by: SaltyPeach

date: January 9, 2008

The animation, detail and how the story is coming out is really nice. But, the voice and the timing just crumples that up and throws it away. You have been using STREAM for sound right? the lip synch kind of bothers me. the storyline is a little slow, but a little suspence never killed any one. So I have noticed in the credits that you do all your voice acting by your self. I know it sucks. I go through it alot. So, I'd like you help you out on the voice acting. Do a charactor or two. From my submissions so far, you wont see what i can do, but if you are interested, PM me and we can talk about it. :)

Score: 7

"nice"

by: Tideh

date: January 8, 2008

Nice drawing, i liked at the beginning they went off into a muay thai fighting style Dragon Ball Z fight. The drawing is really good, however the story line moves really slow paced and the voice acting isnt very good, sounds very scripted which is a shame. Get your voice actors to really put themselves in the role for the next episodes.

Looking forward to watching the rest.

Score: 10

"Man...This is good..."

by: cobo6

date: January 8, 2008

I never watch the first one but man you got me hooked only to leave me hanging in the end...Can't wait until ep. 3 comes out.

Score: 7

"kinda slow"

by: djgo

date: January 8, 2008

maybe it was becus of the file size or my but this seemed to drag
might wana make the dialog advance faster...the over dramatic pauses make it kinda corny...like the characters cant remember their lines or something...

but the art was cool...crisp n clean looking

just work out our timing and the next one should be great