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this is a film about a apoctoliptic dream world were nothing is as it seems... I would really like to here reviews!!!
It's not so great.
It could have been done better.
This is an okay Flash.
hahah that was so bad
ehh, my review
3: starting score
Story +1.5, Although this wasn't well told, there is alot of room for a great story in here, somwhere.
sound/acting -0.5, the music was ok, but looped poorly, plus the roaring seemed out of place.
animation -1.5, this was hard to watch, art sometimes come naturally, but often it doesn't, practice hard, you'll get better.
Original, but could use improvement
I'm a fan of the music, and the graphics are okay (I imagine you used a mouse rather than a tablet, but nice use of gradient) - I think others are right in saying it could use a voice-over, and if you just fixed a few of the glitchy sections, it might flow better.
I liked the mystical story and style, however - very much like an old legend or folk tale.
It isn't done too well as far as graphics go. And your choice for a font didn't match the story being told.
The story was also very strange, but I gave you points for effort.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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