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My sprite flash

Authors

Kyo Umejima (mangostenmaster)

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Japgun14

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Alon Karmi (MarioFlashMovies)

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yoshi77777

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Date Submitted

01/02/2008 | 07:03PM EST

File Information

Movie | 5.4 MB

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Current Score

2.35 / 5.00

Score Rank: #92,307
Popularity Rank: #91,580

334 votes | 1,083 views

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Ages 13+ Mild Violence, Mild Text
My sprite flash
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Author Comments

This voiceless movie has been made in only 2 days! It is very good and is a story of strategy and battle. This movie will rock. Try it! Special thanks to the Garbage whistle crew, even though they havn't helped.
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Average Score: 4.3 / 10

Score: 5
Japgun14

"FREAKY"

date: April 29, 2008

That was ****ing freaky

April 29, 2008

Author's Response:

This one is the wierest one I have ever made. The 1st to pass. There were 3 more that failed but they were all pictures of heads rolling down hills. And one that targeted OBAMA. You know who is dead!

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Score: 0
hybird63

"Okay, I am truely shocked."

date: January 18, 2008

You may remember me from your fourth flash. Hybird63. I said I was going to look into how you actually passed judgement. I am amazed to see how awful this is.

- The white backgrounds were annoying as hell. Glad to see you fixed that, but it wasn't good for this movie.
- Ghost music. That is the killer for most flash made by newbies and n00bs alike. Ghost music is when music is overlapping. I was hearing 4 songs at once, and once the movie restarted, I was hearing 5 songs! GAH!
- The jokes, once again, were unfunny. You suck at comedies, you suck at storylines, and you suck at battle scenes. Give it up already! This only passed because this n00b down there, *sparkwattclock* whom is either a total n00b, or you begged him/her into giving you a 10. Otherwise, you wouldn't have passed judgement.
- Your lack to take criticism. IndirectFire is right, so don't tell him to use his imagination. That is us reviewers job-- praise for those who deserve it, and criticism for those who don't. Stop making flash, please.

Overall: No. This flash is really not good. Try harder, or just stop, and stop being a n00b toward good reviewers.

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Score: 4
lunardragon96

"Ick."

date: January 4, 2008

Sorry, but needs much more time and effort put into it...

April 29, 2008

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Ok.

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Score: 7
CruzAzul-19

"Could get better."

date: January 2, 2008

Well you have a great concept here, and I think this could really be good if you made a couple of improvements. Things like better graphics; for example make the little moving things like perfectly shaped, just don't make it like little moving pictures. Also animation could use some tweeking up to do. STill you are very good, and I know you could do better. Keep up the great effort!

January 18, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks for the help. I am going to make my sprites without the white background for my 4th flash and so on.

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Score: 0
IndirectFire

"Wow"

date: January 2, 2008

That was absolutely horrendous, I can only pray that you made this as a joke of some sort, the only advice I can give, is improve EVERYTHING. This movie had no redeeming qualities whatsoever, all the sprites had the big white backgrounds behind them, the music was terrible, and when you tried to play the other track in the "PLAN" part, the initial music, and the second track BOTH started playing, there was no real plot, or attempt at explaining what was going on, or if there was, i quit about 45 seconds in after all that had been explained was "INVASION" and "PLAN" both of which were on the top layer, so all the action took place under them. I'm going to stop attempting to explain what's wrong and say what you did right, which is to say, pretty much nothing, you spelled "INVASION" and "PLAN" right, good for you!

January 18, 2008

Author's Response:

Try using your imagination. It will help

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