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pot head bob is smoking a bong when a gennie appears
Seriously. I loved this.
I didn't laugh whilst watching this - only staring on in bewilderment. Then, when thecredits started, I chuckled until well after they'd finished.
I could criticise the fact that the painting doesn't match up to the style used elswehere. I could criticise the cheap graphics. But really, you turn it into a stylistic choice - it becomes like a messed up collage and I reckon you should go further down that road. I like the background noise at the end (is it recorded off a TV?) as well as the voice that pops up for 'bong of destiny'. The start, with the tear, makes no sense and I have no idea why it's there. Such a short tune, but it managed to thoroughly bewilder and baffle me.
The one real crit. I'd make is that clicking at the end does nothing. Replay button would be nice.
Otherwise, keep running with this vibe man. Take it further into whatever direction you think will work.
On a side-note, I thought the mouths worked well and I loved the genie appearance.
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Thankyou this is the kind of comment i was lookin for
you have made my day
Thanks for your input
BTW i would like to be a animator
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Well I guess it's nice to make something you are obviously interested in...
The whole drug related storyline really didn't appeal to me. I didn't find it interesting or funny whatsoever. The audio was pretty poor. Volumes varied throughout, which made it annoying to listen to it. Graphics were pretty poor as well. Seemed like a kind of rip off of the canadians on South Park, which I never liked the look of.
btw i felt the south park canadian look was good becaue i am canadian
i will try to improve the audio and also to tell u the truth i am not a pot head i felt it would apeal as somthin that was humorous to others
also the graphics were not supposed to be amazing i made them basc and simple so they ould be easy on the eye
A bit of Meh
I can see what you were trying to do with this movie, and some of it is quite good. Stoner humour mainly.
The graphics need to be greatly improved, not that great at all, simple shapes with no effort at all.
THe sounds is ok, kind of quite and annoying at time.
Overall it's got potential, but I think a rethink is in order.
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i meant for them to be simple but i see what u mean by no effort
It was kind of funny to watch but not real good animation or anything.
Some parts were funny
The VA was good(but soft)
some of the VA was REAL soft
The animation could use some work
Too many filters..
this isn't a real good flash, the audio was too soft, and practice your art.
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i have been told i am an artistic guy but i do feel i am a bit lazy though thanks
Please put some more work in to it
Hi there, you made a very simple flash, it needs a lot of work, I'll sum things up:
+ Ehm... there was an end
- No preloader (if you can't make one, use the one of NG)
- Very simple art
- Used much too many filters
- The talking style looked dumb
- The voices were over exaggerated
- Sometimes voice were very very soft
This isn't a good flash, try working on the audio and don't use filters that often. Also improve on your art. Try using the BBS to find better voice actors.
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I understand were you are going. If you did not find it funny then thats your opion, but the point of this video was to be pointless, just sit back and have a quick laugh
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