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Violent Shorts 1

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Jan 1, 2008 | 4:15 AM EST

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A monster throws giant knifes at things, can anyone stop him? Hope you guys like it.

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NGCactusNGCactus

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

The play button's stuck.

I liked it. My advice to you is to add detail. People dig the shiny stuff, know what I mean?



MechablobyMechabloby

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Sorry to say this but this could be much better.

I'm guessing you're new to flash so I won't write a harsh review or anything like that.

The preloader stayed up for a while after the flash has loaded so you may want to check what's happening with that.

I did think the background of the preloader was slightly clever. You used it within your animation and that's quite creative. The dragon wasn't badly animated for a new guy to flash either.

You may want to improve on your voice acting though. Here's a hint: Try not to get your mouth too close to the microphone. Have a bit of a distance so that it doesn't get static.

Keep working on flash, though. You'll improve in the future but for now, this just gets a 4/10 from me.


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clinto5clinto5

Rated 1 / 5 stars

This is just awful.

Terrible animation no explosion this leaves alot to be desired.



CazmoVCazmoV

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Erm...

Errr...
First, the animation was awful.
I'm sorry but it was. The preloader stayed up for 3 seconds, and the storyline wasn't very original.
But i did like the dragon bit, he was animated quite well.

Keep trying...

CazmoV


243879 responds:

yeah about the pre- loader thing, i don't know why it does that.


Krazy-RexKrazy-Rex

Rated 3 / 5 stars

good shorts

I liked the animation but the graphics was not good.most of the ime everything was great. And the dinosaur like thing was cool. Can you PM me how to draw that.